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Below is the poem entitled THE ENDING OF CAPRICE which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Tangy summer , breezes in heat Through minutes you forestall And drench the moonlight so replete Beneath your fiery kohl. The silken air drapes blossoms scent Releasing fragrant balm Then rustles every tree’s lament In fading season’s psalms. Mild nights release stars’ blinking glow Caressing burnished ease, That only your zest can bestow The ending of caprice. Beneath the parting of glossed beams As days wither in space; My August passion falls downstream Yet held in your embrace. Summer's End Contest of Francine Roberts 8/26/2013

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 3:51:00 PM
    nette: The poem is elegant and beautiful. Congrats on your win, and the great poem! :) G.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:06:00 PM
    good win...SKAT

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 11:46:00 AM
    Hello Nette.. nice win..PD

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 5:56:00 PM
    Delightful writing, Nette. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 11:02:00 AM
    Nette, You rule again--how this site was naked in your absence! This would make a great song. The way you've alternated iambic tetrameter with trimeter gives it a perfect flow and it has a romantic sonnet feel. Love how you write Nette!

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 7:15:00 AM
    I'm sure this will be a winner so I do not have to wish you good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:51:00 PM
    hi Nette, intentionally to visit u here and i need a little favor for you. im writing oration piece for the contest in our school. because i saw that ur honest commentator and i love ur write. hope u can help me to give ur advice and comments. ill give the links of my blog if this done. hope i can see ur comment there. thanks and God bless!---Elai

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 11:59:00 AM
    Hi nette....My gosh you capture just everything that one can fee,,,,l just love your poetry, peace & blessings cherie

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 9:49:00 AM
    It is exceptional! Flawless, beautiful and elegant. Thank you for posting it! :) G.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Nette Nette words left in the dictionary to describe your beauty.....just keep writing your words so we can enjoy!..thank you

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:04:00 AM
    This one burns my veins, but kindly. Love, daver

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:09:00 PM
    You have amazed me again with such a powerful write here my friend! I don't know how you can come up with such gorgeous poetry all the time, this one is one of my favorites of yours! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening! What a delightful piece, Great & Grandiose Work!!

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:54:00 PM
    My goodness Nette, I can't believe how many beautiful poems you have written. Your style reminds me of the Romantic period poems. I must say I am impressed. Allan

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 6:38:00 PM
    When I think of you Nette, I picture you amongst the night stars, and love all that you share and all the you so lovingly embrace, thank you xxx

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 5:53:00 PM
    Love it! Fair well sweet Summer Fair thee well!

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:58:00 PM
    My august passion falls downstream yet held in your embrace..What a beauty

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    Date: 8/26/2013 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Re linda..yep i miss her so much.What worries me is that i sent her a get well card and she never answered..Sort of concern me dear.
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 3:47:00 PM
    Is this for the contest on summer's end.? It seems to be and I love how you said it so creatively, Nette. nice seeing you here today!

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 2:29:00 PM
    I felt many goosebumps while reading this. Your work does that to me so well. Great job here!

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 2:07:00 PM
    Very descriptive and expressive work ..Enjoyed reading this one today..I like the next to the last line..August is almosted gone or tumbled for sure gone for this year..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 12:09:00 PM
    Very, very nice, Nette. Best wishes in the contest. hugs, Catie :)