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The End of Time

My father’s hands Toiled in time Red lines and scars Left a story to be told A life of sorrow Or perhaps of glory Only the man Can tell the story But he is gone now And I can’t read his palms He lies in rest Or so they say A body that carried the soul Is but an empty shell To be put to rest Six feet under Ashes to ashes Dust to dust In that grave We do trust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/27/2013 10:46:00 PM
Simply stated, deeply felt. Congratulations on the contest win. I am moved by the line " A body that carried the soul is but an empty shell"..
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/1/2013 1:03:00 PM
Thanks Karen, As always, always~Kilmer
Date: 7/16/2013 10:19:00 PM
congrats on this winner. Russell
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 7/17/2013 1:04:00 PM
Thanks Russell. I appreciate you taking the time to read it. SRK
Date: 7/15/2013 8:06:00 PM
an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 7/15/2013 8:13:00 PM
Aw Poet Destroyer you are too kind! Love ya! TRGOFATPNE!
Date: 7/15/2013 7:54:00 PM
an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 7/15/2013 7:05:00 PM
Stephen , Congratulations, glad you decided to enter this free verse in my contest. :-) love ~ SKAT~
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 7/15/2013 7:22:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, Thank you for the recognition and your vote of confidence. Look forward to seeing you and reading your poems. "The road goes on forever and the party never ends" TRGOFATPNE!
Date: 7/4/2013 6:55:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
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Date: 7/4/2013 6:09:00 PM
I like this! Nicely written, and I love the rhyme and rhythm.
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 7/4/2013 6:56:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. I am not so good at this so forgive me for my stupidity.

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