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The End of a Life

I ended a life just like that. It was the tiniest of creatures Scurrying across my arm. I didn't mean to do it, it happened Just that fast. And after the deed was done, I reflected. I felt an immediate loss. Brushing it away I muttered to myself. I didn't want to do it. It was a knee-jerk reaction, a human Response . As I have grown in spirit I have come to realize that all of life is precious no matter and we all just want to survive.

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Chinedum Ekwobi

Date: 8/8/2022 4:28:00 AM

Remorse after Bestiality! A White could still kill you if, it were a dog. So, you are forgiven.

Weston Gregory

Date: 8/6/2022 8:49:00 AM

It's worth our compassion to define life worth. Nice write.

Ray Zottola
Date: 8/7/2022 5:50:00 PM

Did I say I'm still working on myself? ??

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 8/5/2022 2:10:00 AM

Very beautiful.

Ray Zottola
Date: 8/7/2022 5:48:00 PM

Thank you Akham!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/4/2022 7:14:00 PM

All life is not just precious, they are your own. But don't regret what you did. You have liberated it into a higher form of existence.

Ray Zottola
Date: 8/7/2022 5:49:00 PM

I'm still working on it!??

Franci Hoffman

Date: 8/4/2022 5:08:00 PM

It seems to be cruel to snuff a tiny life, especially since usually no harm is intended. However, I guess that's human nature to ward off something that might be harmful. Great poem and makes one realize all life is precious. Great read!

Ray Zottola
Date: 8/7/2022 5:50:00 PM

Thank you Franci!

Gary Radice

Date: 6/19/2022 2:08:00 AM

I hear what you say Ray and know what you mean: I always have feelings of guilt.. that said, if the earth is invaded by a whole load of 8 foot ginormous ants bent on revenge I would have to go into hiding and probably stay there. Great read. Cheers - Gary

Ray Zottola
Date: 6/21/2022 12:39:00 PM

Yes. TY. My soul is changing how I use to think about the things that are important. Know what I mean?

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/13/2022 12:07:00 PM

Hi Ray, I know what that is like, wow, an awful feeling. You learned a lesson. We all do. Life is so precious. Good one! Huggs, Panagiotaxx People are far more hurtful.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/21/2022 1:19:00 PM

Someone, namely...you knows Greek! Yes it means all holy. I am hardly that.))) But I admire names in all languages that have significance. All holy, refers to the Mother of God. Panayiotis is the male given to many Greek Boys. My Names day is the 15th of August! One of my favorite uncles shared your name, Ray! A compassionate and fun man. Hugs, Panagiota xx

Ray Zottola
Date: 6/21/2022 12:42:00 PM

Love the name! All holy? Beautiful!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/10/2022 2:48:00 AM

Such things happen. Occasionally some ant would venture up my arm. The slap comes without thinking. But I wold have no pity for mosquitoes. Hope we will become friends on the soup.

Ray Zottola
Date: 6/13/2022 7:11:00 AM

For some strange reason. Mosquitoes seem to only like my ankles, but you're right! My soul hasn't developed enough for them or flies. I always feel for ants though. Friends are good. The soul needs this.