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Precious moments fade to black at twilight as sleep shuts my weary eyes. It’s the end of a day. My wants, needs and expectations all rest snuggly beneath my pillow... where they'll peacefully sleep. So goodnight, moon, and all the stars that shine. So long to all birds that sing... till we meet tomorrow. Submitted for... Strand Choice Any Form, Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 01/19/2020 Date written: 10/27/2019

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Date: 5/22/2020 8:53:00 AM
Hello Edward, A look back. Poems that we found answers for some of life's questions BC (Before COVID-19). -Richard
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Date: 5/22/2020 12:33:00 PM
Thanks for revisiting one of my really special old poems, Richard:-) I appreciate it!
Date: 1/21/2020 12:02:00 PM
Makes me want to just snuggle in!!! Lovely write dear friend. Lonna
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Date: 1/21/2020 12:13:00 PM
Thank you, Lonna:-)
Date: 1/20/2020 10:51:00 PM
Edward, This is just lovely. As delicate as dreams themselves. Wonderful images. Congratulations!!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/20/2020 11:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sam:-)
Date: 11/23/2019 12:51:00 PM
Beautifully written :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/23/2019 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi:-)
Date: 11/16/2019 7:49:00 AM
Always to hope for tomorrow. Nice poem 'll try for contest
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Date: 11/16/2019 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha:-)
Date: 11/16/2019 7:09:00 AM
Great poem and example for your contest, Edward. Well written! Charlie
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Date: 11/16/2019 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie:-)
Date: 11/15/2019 2:18:00 PM
Edward, beautiful and dreamy and a great example for your contest !
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/15/2019 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Constance:-)
Date: 11/13/2019 7:44:00 AM
Superb, example Mr. Ibeh...^WW^ :o)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/13/2019 9:16:00 AM
Thank you, WW:-)
Date: 11/12/2019 10:49:00 PM
nice example with great imagery .. love it
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/13/2019 9:15:00 AM
Thank you,Eve:-)
Date: 11/12/2019 8:20:00 AM
As far as I see, capital letters and punctuation are allowed. Noted)
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Date: 11/11/2019 6:28:00 PM
beautiful example for your contest.... :) hugs
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Date: 11/7/2019 2:49:00 AM
Such a soothing poem Edward, makes me feel like I want to snuggle back in bed on this dull grey rainy day:-) a super string of poems to inspire us:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/7/2019 4:10:00 AM
Thank you, Jan:-)
Date: 11/6/2019 11:15:00 AM
great examples dear man! Hard to compete with :) thanks for sharing x:)-luloo
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Date: 11/6/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thank you, dearest LuLoo;-)
Date: 11/6/2019 9:29:00 AM
Edward lovely kimos and great example for your contest!
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Date: 11/6/2019 2:11:00 PM
Thank you, Constance:-)
Date: 11/6/2019 12:31:00 AM
this is such a lovely set, Edward. Soupmail for you
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Date: 11/6/2019 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea:-) Check your soupmail
Date: 10/27/2019 8:11:00 PM
Edward, A truly nice lullaby poem and promise of the day in this Kimo. I've never heard of this type of Haiku. -Richard
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Date: 10/27/2019 9:03:00 PM
Thank you, Richard:-) Glad you liked the poem!

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