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The Enchantment of a Hero

Strong and tall, bold and lean All qualities of a hero I've seen He found me almost in my grave I was soon to become the Earths slave Now I am enchanted with my hero, see Captivating my heart, making my soul shake Leaving an ache in my torso, my troubles leave With-in my spirit, out of heavens sake His appearence in every dream when I wake Opens up to my inner person makes every day a date

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/6/2012 10:52:00 PM
Loyalty makes the heart grow fonder Ruth - a great balance of clarity & mystery - nice tempo too! Heroism is the meaning of Life - you are the oracle for me - J.A.B. P.S. I adore India -
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Date: 7/26/2012 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Ruth. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2012 3:33:00 AM
Ruth super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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Date: 7/25/2012 2:44:00 PM
thank you David
Date: 7/24/2012 8:19:00 AM
You can list your FORM as Verse or RHYME [when in doubt you can ALWAYS use Verse]Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/25/2012 2:44:00 PM
thank you Debbie the advice will be used
Date: 7/23/2012 5:11:00 PM
Vey nice sweet poem! Your words are magical! This is one of my favorite poems! Jane XoXo
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Date: 7/23/2012 11:26:00 PM
thank you it's about an actual hero
Date: 7/23/2012 7:20:00 AM
congrats Ruth on an amazing write and win luv.. extraordinary work..
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Courtney Courtney
Date: 7/23/2012 11:26:00 PM
thank you

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