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The Empty Old Church Re-Opens

For over a year quiet it lay, the big gray stones in the walls framing what seemed more empty tomb than church-- the stained glass windows did not sing out their beauty for no one was there to hear... well, God, as He's everywhere, but not his priests, nor sextons nor ushers, and no worshipers as they were all sheltering at home. But isn't a church [or temple or mosque] the home of believers? Why did they all stay away when the terrible storm plagued all parts of an unprepared world? When Jesus slept in the boat as a tempest plagued his men, men who saw his work every day, who knew his power, his other- worldly love, his lonely communion with his Father, yet still they feared, like children terrified of the dark. And then in their cowardice they scolded Jesus for falling asleep! For leaving them naked to the brutal wind and stinging rains... and his heart must have cracked a bit to see that his chosen ones were still blind and deaf and dumb. Yet our church, our lovely stone church built in the Anglican style of the last century when faith was still central to most lives, welcomed us, the handful or two of mostly aging or old worshipers who came to talk to God as one, to sing to God as a single voice, to listen for His ever so quiet Word, just a whisper, so easy to miss...

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Date: 8/5/2021 11:03:00 AM
Back with congratulations for this wonderful write LJ. "Just a whisper, so easy to miss..." Every time I read this I see new things and hear new whispers - truly the sign of a good poem of many layers. Blessings!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/7/2021 10:09:00 AM
As always Sam, coming from you the praise is extra sweet! Vaya con Dios siempre!
Date: 8/2/2021 5:58:00 PM
Lovely writing. I enjoyed - Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/3/2021 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, Regina--go with God always
Date: 8/2/2021 6:01:00 AM
to listen for His ever so quiet Word, just a whisper, so easy to miss... Very beautiful writing. Congratulations on your win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 8/3/2021 8:31:00 AM
Thank you-- yes, sometimes I wish He weren't so quiet, but then we would not be paying the attention we should...
Date: 6/23/2021 12:16:00 PM
Amazing reflection LJ. Reminds me of Debussy's Submerged Cathedral. Wonderfully written, striking images my friend. Congratulations and blessings to you! We can only pray that God will be central to people once again.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/24/2021 10:52:00 AM
Thanks Sam--I love Debussy but am not familiar with this work-- and I suspect --sadly-- people will only turn to God when they have suffered... at least, that is how I found Him.
Date: 6/22/2021 10:08:00 AM
Wow. Great. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/22/2021 10:29:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj!
Date: 6/21/2021 10:29:00 AM
An enjoyable read LJ, hopefully it wont be long before all places of worship open. They're have services and live streams but its not the same. Tom
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/22/2021 10:30:00 AM
No it isn't Tom-- as I realized in depth....

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