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The Empty Apartment -

Damp winter cold pervades The emptiness White painted walls Clean sanded floors All signs of occupation Gone -

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John Loving Iii

Date: 1/6/2011 4:44:00 AM

ready to rent

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/5/2011 5:39:00 AM

this is really interesting, Liz, glad i've read it. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2010 7:09:00 PM

Very descriptive, Liz. I really enjoyed the read!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/19/2010 6:46:00 AM

Liz, I like the stark contrast between the pristine apartment and the emptiness the fills the walls. A poignant poem, dear. Have a very merry Christmas. Hope you are spending it with family and friends. Love, Carolyn