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The Empty Academy Schoolhouse

The Empty Academy Schoolhouse It stands on a vast green lot, No trees to shelter it from heavy, gray clouds on the rolling foothill horizon. Its thin coat of white paint peels, revealing bare, dry-rotted wood. The rickety porch boards, once sturdy under children’s energetic steps, look about to collapse at the slightest wind gust. What’s it like inside? Puddles of water from the last rain? Rat’s nest in the woodstove? Any desks or yellowed books, pencils, love notes left behind? A soiled ribbon slid off some girl’s braid? A chalkboard with spelling words or arithmetic problems still on it? What songs, prayers, or memorized poems still echo off faded, white-washed walls? When was the first day of school? When was the last? What became of all the children, who once ran around laughing all over this green meadow? What happened to ball players, clover-chain weavers, kids who picked lupines and fiddlenecks for their teacher? Did they leave Academy, or do they lie in the cemetery on a nearby hill? Published in Song of the San Joaquin, Spring 2021 Issue This old school house is in the tiny pioneer town of Academy, just outside of Fresno, California, near the Sierra Nevada foothills. Some of the descendants of the pioneer families still remain in the area.

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Date: 11/5/2023 7:11:00 PM
All the children back then learned the same things at different ages in 1 room. Wasn't that something? Reading, writing & arithmetic. Almost like the Amish still do now. I would love to visit the old school house you write about as a former teacher. Your poem reminded me of the TV show, Little House On The Prairie, from the 70's. It was nice to read, close my eyes afterwards and imagine your words and and the history wrapped around them.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 12/19/2023 2:01:00 PM
Wow I appreciate your really cool comments. Maybe some day you can see this old school house. The same society that restored the church now wants to restore the school house.
Date: 7/29/2021 4:57:00 AM
A beautifully crafted moving poem! Congratulations, I see this poem had been published - definitely a remarkable poem with detailed and excellent images! It brings back the memories of a schoolhouse I went for a few years, in a village, when I was very young. Trying to imagine how that building looks like now! Love ~ Mala
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 7/29/2021 1:35:00 PM
Hi Mala! Thank you for visiting me. You should write a poem about that school house you went to. I would love to read your story.
Date: 7/28/2021 6:46:00 PM
I love visiting old, unoccupied buildings. They are full of shadow stories. I feel the ghosts roaming this abandoned schoolhouse. Nicely done! :)
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 7/29/2021 1:34:00 PM
Hi Thomas! Always great to hear from you. Thank you for the awesome comment!
Date: 7/21/2021 5:18:00 PM
great job making this one come to life so we could see the school...in my area they have taken some old school buildings and turned them into apartments and condos, a factory too...i got to live in the one for a couple years, it even still had the original boiler room and school bell up top, sometimes kids would go up and wring it and the police would get a good laugh from it... good write :)
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 7/23/2021 7:23:00 PM
Thank you Sandra! Must have been cool to love in one of those!
Date: 7/20/2021 10:43:00 AM
What a strikingly beautiful poem, Jennifer! I have an urge to peep inside and see with my own eyes...and yet, I would feel like I'm intruding on the past. ~ Best regards // paul
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 7/20/2021 2:53:00 PM
Hi Paul! Thank you for the compliment. I would feel much the same way.
Date: 7/15/2021 6:08:00 PM
How beautifully depicted,, every word gives us a glimpse into the school house, Some things remain a mystery to most, but not to those who lived it. Thanks for sharing with such keen observance, :)
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 7/19/2021 4:37:00 PM
Thank you! So happy you like it!
Date: 7/15/2021 10:36:00 AM
What great imagery of the school.... you literally took us to that old school as it is now... so many beautiful lines... Congrats on this poem being published too Jennifer.. Thank you for your recent visit to my poem and comment... God bless... ~ Ani
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 7/15/2021 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Ani! That made my day!
Date: 7/4/2021 4:57:00 PM
That was a very moving poem. It reminded me of some old places I've visited. It also brought to mind a statue at Lovers Point in Pacific Grove CA, of a boy carrying a sailboat, that was part of a graduating class at the beginning of World War 2. https://www.google.com/search?as_st=y&tbm=isch&as_q=&as_epq=Lovers+point+statue+class+of&as_oq=&as_eq=&imgsz=&imgar=&imgc=&imgcolor=&imgtype=&cr=&as_sitesearch=&safe=images&as_filetype=&tbs=#imgrc=PxoXhFmS9Q-FAM
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 7/4/2021 5:13:00 PM
Happy 4th Mark! So glad you enjoyed this poem! Thank you for the visit. I will look at this site for Lovers’ Point.
Date: 7/1/2021 4:48:00 PM
Jennifer, beautifully penned poem full of wonderful word selection and great lines, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 7/2/2021 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Constance! Your encouraging words made my morning!
Date: 6/25/2021 7:14:00 PM
A very wonderful and dynamic poem.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 7/2/2021 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj! Glad you like it!
Date: 6/23/2021 8:17:00 AM
OMG, A Wow and fave. Not the ordinary. expected words of imagery, but the extraordinary painted, heard, seen from a born poet soul, with a striking end! Thank you, Jennifer. Hugs
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/25/2021 3:04:00 PM
I’m so glad Sally! That made my day! Thank you!
Date: 6/18/2021 7:27:00 PM
Wonderful Description.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/25/2021 3:03:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj!
Date: 6/16/2021 4:38:00 PM
Your description of the school make me want to know more--I suppose that is what the town feels--as eloquently you queried. Well done, indeed! Congrats Jennifer for having this poem published.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/16/2021 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Vijay! So glad you dropped in!
Date: 6/14/2021 10:12:00 PM
WoW! Jennifer, You’ve penned a well-written poem about the old school. I found it to be heartfelt and powerful. The last two lines of your second stanza were profound and impactful. Congrats on getting the poem published. Have a good evening- Alexis
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/15/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, for taking the time to write such encouraging words.
Date: 6/14/2021 10:00:00 AM
Wow... powerful. A trip through yesterday, felt and relived... Excellent ... Ann
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/14/2021 4:07:00 PM
Thank you friend! Glad you like it!
Date: 6/12/2021 8:56:00 PM
This is a very dynamic poem, Jennifer. I love the fine detail of the line "a soiled ribbon slid off some girl's braid? And all the questions of inquiry. Very well-developed poem. Carol Louise
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/13/2021 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Carol Louise! I hope all is well with you! Happy writing!
Date: 6/12/2021 4:29:00 PM
It is fascinating to contemplate the history imbued in such a place, Jennifer. Your captivating poem, filled with likely imaginings, was a pleasure to read throughout. Congratulations on having it published. Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/14/2021 9:27:00 PM
You are more than welcome, Jennifer. Thank you for the compliment. I am so happy that my poem was a part of your mom's special day. Please give her my belated happy birthday wishes. I hope she had a truly wonderful day. :)
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/13/2021 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn, for visiting me and I’m happy you like the poem. Yours are always a treat to read. I introduced my mom to yours by printing your poppy poem and other Soupers’ poems about all things orange for her birthday, since orange is her favorite color. She liked your poppy one.
Date: 6/12/2021 1:18:00 PM
Enjoyed your verse Jennifer, you painted a lovely image with your words. I bet that old building could tell many stories. Congrats too on having it published in the San Joaquin journal. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/12/2021 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Tom, for stopping by with encouraging words. Yes, praise Jesus all is going well. Hope the same for you!
Date: 6/12/2021 1:11:00 PM
This is an exquisite, poignant poem, Jennifer, full of rich images of a time from the past well-remembered. I'm not at all surprised that it has already been published and wider read. Thanks so much for visiting me, too.
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Jennifer Fenn
Date: 6/12/2021 1:14:00 PM
Hi L Milton! Thank you for your encouraging words! So happy you like it! Thank you for stopping by.

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