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the empty

I thought love nor sorrow could penetrate this place
What haunts me has found me again
Unwavering and empty
It wears my face
Its back to take all that remains of me
These scars on my soul are its only trace

Copyright © james knox

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  1. Date: 7/19/2009 7:45:00 PM
    intense! I like it a lot! james, well done! and thanks for comments, jim

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 10:56:00 PM
    its sad but very good and its very meaningful! very good definately shouts a story and it is waiting to be heard...great write!! Ciara=)

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 6:54:00 PM
    Nicely done, James. "Unwavering and empty/ It wears my face" great lines. Good job. Ruben.