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The Emotional Flinch

Surging like electricity to the esoteric abyss of my soul, felt in all body parts, the flinching brought to the shoal. Even the slightest stub of a toe, a beloved child in distress, causes bile to roil and roll, the bowels of my heart in duress. Likewise the agony of a pet - the suffering shrill, painful howl. As a child I buried a silver dollar, his float to water’s top foul. The automatic flinch - squeeze of fists, jaw, stomach, lady parts. My brain disoriented, imaginative, culling others pain is a fine art. The news of a small child hit by a homerun play, and the grab Of the disintegrating player, dissolving into tears - a poignant stab. Why do I linger so long, explaining at length my wearisome woe. So you’ll grasp my afferent saturation and how my compassion grows. 5/30/2019 What Makes You Flinch Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver

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Date: 6/2/2019 8:00:00 PM
Heartfelt flinching, couched in poetic terms. This one certainly checks the context boxes, Kim! :) gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/28/2019 10:20:00 PM
Back with richly deserved congrats, Kim. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2019 8:01:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 5/30/2019 1:01:00 PM
You feel those emotions because your a caring person Kim. Well written. Good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2019 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! :)

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