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The Embrace

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The Embrace

The full moon sat tucked
In the darkness of the sky

In quietness you came behind
……………..I could feel you 
Although you came in silence
 
Every member of my body 
Standing at attention craving, waiting
For the tenderness of your touch

The stillness of the air 
the perfume of lilacs
All add to envelop us in this moment

You wait patiently knowing
The anticipation I’m feeling

Appreciating my inability
To breathe
Paralyzed by my desire

The back of your hand slides

  S
      L
         O
     W
   L
     Y

Tracing my face

Your lips find the nakedness
of my neck
And I tilt my head in submission

You lure me into you
Nestle me tightly
Securely in your embrace

Without words
Without time
Without movement

Your eyes seek for something in mine
The whole of my being is yours
As if this moment in time 
Was reserved just for us to look deeply 
Into each other and find ourselves
Our longing
                  Our needs
                                 Our truths
                                               Our expectations
                         Our future

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  1. Date: 2/12/2009 11:29:00 AM
    wonderful sensual writing Laurie... powerful and emotive ! Thanks for your recent comments Laurie.. always appreciated.. Col

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 7:49:00 AM
    Thanks for your kind words Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 7:27:00 AM
    Thanks for the comment Laurie..didn't mean to ruin your day. Love, Chris.

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 5:19:00 AM
    LOL thanks for making my morning-- you are four kinds of crazy--but I love it!!!!

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 5:06:00 AM
    Yeah---I'd bite just come after the day you get your nails done...Gloomy? LOL you need a check-up from the neck-up yep I started it.... Only kidding about me starting it and thanks for the comments you still seem sweet :) Frank

  1. Date: 2/11/2009 12:20:00 AM
    A passionate love poem Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 1:02:00 PM
    Awesome write Laurie. Very passionate and nicely arranged! Enjoyed this read. Great job. Love, Robin

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 10:51:00 AM
    Ssshhhhhh lol

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 6:00:00 AM
    I love the layout of this, and what a tender and beautiful love poem. I esp like the ending...So romantic...."your lips find the nakedness of my neck" oooolaala. Love me

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 5:16:00 AM
    and I again-- I am speechless with your poetic write-- hmm.. Your needs, Your truths, your expectations, your future, say what's really on YOUR mind!!! Only kidding.. I am speechless though.... I love your your writing, and your expressions wonderfully done..

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 4:54:00 AM
    Beautiful write Laurie..nakedness of neck is a cool line..I love the flow of this piece and the form of it..beautiful and romantic my friend..well done.

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 4:42:00 AM
    Oh Laurie, this outstanding. Especially love and feel that third verse. So yummy delicious those crazy craving feelings. Beautiful presentation that makes you feel it just right. That full moon has some power, huh. Awesome write! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 2/10/2009 3:15:00 AM
    Nice structure, the opening lines are great...Raul

  1. Date: 2/9/2009 10:28:00 PM
    Laurie , that full moon , got an eyeful , there ... Very well presented , romantic piece ....