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The Elephant

I lie here, naked and exposed, splayed out upon an open plain, under the hot, African sun, still as stone slowly decomposing. My life fluids have drained away. I am a massive hulk of dried out skin and bones my large trunk lies flaccid at my side, my great ears are rotting at the edges. I smell of putrid waste. Do I detect a presence in my midst? Do I hear a sudden gasp? A muffled cry? Are your eyes widening, pupils dilating in horror? Do come and see my wretched state. For I was hunted for pleasure, for mere sport, discarded like a worthless penny shot down for the hell of it. Why is man so careless? So callous? For we beasts are at your mercy. You mourn for me today, but will you care tomorrow? I lie here, naked and exposed, splayed out upon an open grave. Written on 4/8/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/16/2016 10:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this very moving piece Laura. It so sad that some humans think their worth so much more than these beautiful animals. #7 ; )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/16/2016 11:50:00 PM
So true about these wonderful creatures, Connie. Thanks for stopping by to comment!
Date: 4/16/2016 5:05:00 AM
Magnificent write Laura.. congrats on great win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/16/2016 8:00:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma. Glad you liked it!
Date: 4/15/2016 6:25:00 PM
Laura, absolutely and totally amazing, it made me want to weep, you penned the emotion so well, a winner for me always , 7 ++++
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/15/2016 8:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie :) It came to me all at once, and the emotions just poured forth. I still feel sad about the horror committed to these beautiful creatures.
Date: 4/15/2016 6:21:00 PM
wow, I hope he scored you high on this one. You did a FANTASTIC job with that theme!!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/15/2016 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I was emotionally moved by the picture of this magnificent creature who was murdered by poachers. I pray this practice will cease soon!
Date: 4/15/2016 9:55:00 AM
Your piercing verses gave me pause, so senseless this slaughter is. Awesome expression, congratulations!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/15/2016 8:44:00 PM
Thanks for your comments, Dineen. It truly is a horrific tragedy.
Date: 4/15/2016 7:48:00 AM
Yours is such an emotionally rich composition, noteworthy for its reflexive aptitude. I succumbed to your words and message in utter awe while those in need of hearing its message most, abase themselves in craven acts of horror and wanton turpitude. I wrote one with similar intent about wolves, entitled Wolf Song.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/15/2016 8:20:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful rely, Mark. I'll check out your Wolf poem, as well!
Date: 4/15/2016 5:06:00 AM
Bold and emotion-rich... Congratulations on your top win...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/15/2016 8:18:00 AM
Thanks, Probir
Date: 4/14/2016 11:54:00 PM
Great idea to use personification. Congratulations on your high placement. Such senseless slaughter for money. It's so heartbreaking. SuZ
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/15/2016 8:17:00 AM
Thanks, Suzanne..
Date: 4/14/2016 5:47:00 PM
Wow very powerful Laura, congratulations
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/14/2016 9:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel. Glad you were moved by it :)
Date: 4/14/2016 5:38:00 PM
Back to say congratulations Laura on your winning write. I knew it was a good one the first time I read it. Peace young lady:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/14/2016 9:29:00 PM
Thank you for your supportive words, Daniel. I appreciate them so much;)
Date: 4/14/2016 5:21:00 PM
So powerful and full of emotion and wisdom regarding our dear earth creatures, Laura. Congratulations on our fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/14/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. I appreciate your kind comments very much :)
Date: 4/10/2016 9:16:00 PM
I just completed an article about elephants and realize that - as you showed in your fine work - that we must act boldly to insure their survival. Good message and poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2016 11:33:00 PM
Thank you for your response to my poem, Matthew. Glad you could also write on this important subject, as well.
Date: 4/10/2016 12:01:00 AM
Vivid imagery of one of our most noble beasts, and that they should be treated in this manner is a crying shame. A poem that I hope will bring attention to this horrific endeavour. BRAVO to you for this. Best wishes, Keith
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/10/2016 8:47:00 PM
Thank you, Keith, for your thoughtful response. I hope this poem helps make more people aware of the elephant's plight, whether killed for sport or for poaching.
Date: 4/8/2016 12:32:00 PM
Very emotive write, Laura. Excellent interpretation. Have a great weekend. Peace young lady:) Good luck in contest.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/8/2016 12:45:00 PM
See them "murdered!"
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/8/2016 12:38:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. Elephants are so magestic, and it's very sad to see them die.

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