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The Element of Water

Sizzling day of summer heat, Requisite hydration I really need, No rain, no precipitation today, Brilliant azure, no clouds this day, I stood alone, poised, impermeable, Damp crystallisation so feasible, From this diving board I spring, Invigorate me, I commence to sing, But!! I forgot I'm way too old, Man, this water's really cold!!!!!!

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:00:00 AM
Julie, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/17/2016 10:27:00 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Julie ..
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Date: 4/17/2016 11:46:00 AM
Julie, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 4/17/2016 6:45:00 AM
Had to include this poem in the list of winners with a big wide smile! Congratulations and thank you for entering!
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