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The Echoes of Afar Distinct Soul

A friend cast to the land of a distinct Frigid base, she said... Lonesome embraced the yearn, mum likewise Forfeit the identity, stumbled to the pivot of stir A missed scraped of self-consciousness The alert of all mistaken Failed which taken about the half year of a time Still another year kindly to visit Await is the other chapter of her book which filled by the tears and sweats Those eyes desiccated Fagged had spun for the still Tiring had mourned upon her fool If only the existence able to teleport or be returned Indeed I knew Thou heart rooted within Seeks the pedestal of berth and backrest for a lean Fell into a soot of mother-earth and longing for the creatures which stood upon Once thou reborn Morphed into the maturer form And when the time has come Every single cells of glory threw pride upon sun For the down valley beneath her soul taught the life lessons Afar from a distinct revealed the pavement of her inner soul Nevertheless frigid base undertaken the coral of her blizzard *************************************************************** free-for-all Free Poetry Contest Sponsor Jim David

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/3/2012 9:43:00 AM
You write so well my dear Yanny! I love every line in your poem and they are all wonderful. This is a winner for me. I'll read more of your poems next time because it's too late here. Good night! love and hugs, Leonora
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/3/2012 9:56:00 AM
Same here, it's midnight already, lol :D, thank you for checking out my page Leonora,glad to have you here
Date: 12/2/2012 11:38:00 AM
My friend Yanny, you are really very clever. - I admire this poem! - I'm crossing all my fingers for YOU to win this contest! - Have a great new week. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/3/2012 9:59:00 AM
Thank you Anne, it's a big support from you and I am really happy to have those comment by you :D
Date: 12/2/2012 11:18:00 AM
I am always mesmorized by your words. You use them in ways I would never consider. I find your interpretation of the language to be refreshing and innocent. Child like wonder with a woman's sensibility and maturity.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/3/2012 10:01:00 AM
I tried my best Richard :D but still yours are the most adorable :)
Date: 12/2/2012 11:12:00 AM
Yanny Please remind me which poem you wanted me to re-read hon..HUGS! Then I will for sure go do it! Light & Love
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Date: 12/2/2012 9:08:00 AM
Such wonderful words flow across my screen. You are a beautiful Poet inside and out... hugs Michael
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/3/2012 10:04:00 AM
Thank you Michael, your comments always refreshing :D, Your encouragement made me feel more comfort and motivated in writing, glad to have you here :D

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