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The Earth As I See It

Atop the mountain, watching “Earth Live” Struggles, Created by Mankind Mother “Earth” You overcome : THRIVE Love oozes from Your “HEART, SOUL, MIND “ Struggles, Created by Mankind Thoughtlessness ; You have Forgiven Love oozes from Your “HEART, SOUL, MIND “ The survival Pact, we both are Driven Thoughtlessness ; You have Forgiven Memories of the day of “ Rebirth “ The survival Pact, we both are Driven To “ Re-Supply “ His GIFT, Called “EARTH” Memories of the day of “ Rebirth “ The song of the Birds; the Tears of Tomorrow To “ Re-Supply : His GIFT, Called “EARTH” Replenish the LOVE; it will never know Sorrow The song of the Birds; the Tears of Tomorrow Mother “Earth” You overcome : THRIVE Replenish the LOVE; it will never know Sorrow Atop the Mountain, watching Earth : ALIVE Inspired By the Contest “ Pantoum “ Sponsored By Paula Swanson Written By HGarvey Daniel Esquire Dedicated to Paula Swanson; Thank-YOU for YOUR inspiring “ Pantoums “

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Date: 12/14/2010 1:18:00 AM
Many congrats HGarvey on winning coveted HM in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 12/13/2010 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win HG in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM in the Pantoum Contest, HG! Enjoy! Hope all is well! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/12/2010 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest with this joyful poem, HG. Love and blessings for happy holidays, Carolyn
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Date: 12/12/2010 7:39:00 AM
Congrats HG my silent beau, on your HM in Paula's Pantoum contest with this vibrant write and win ..enjoy a special honor all your own with luv .. from your forever and always "Sweetheart" ...
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of paula, HG
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Date: 12/7/2010 12:28:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today HG. Hope to be reading it for a long time to come. Thank you for sharing it. The best to you in the contest. Thank you for your always kind words my forever friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 4:40:00 PM
I love the joy and hope that spring from this poem, H.G. Hope you are filled with both this holiday season. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/6/2010 3:16:00 PM
Hey there, just stopped in to say thanks for trying that sestina form is a killer..grrrrrr...but I like having ALL those loverly words..if I wasn't already late judging I would have tried to be of more help..please DO work on it I can tell you were invested in your words. Light & Love always
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:11:00 PM
Nice Pantoum with variant refrains, HG
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