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The Eagle Cries

The night reveals the beauty of your love, As senses fall, one by one, it’s you I see, I am below and you – you are above, A goddess taking all her want from me. In your embrace you set my passions free, Yet captive in the power of your eyes, You hold me here, the place I yearn to be Where my silent voice can ignite your sighs Release your soul to fly the cosmic skies, You gyrate round demanding even more, As hunger calls clear as the eagle cries, I know I’ve reached that sweetest, molten core O love, sweet love, as you now take your need, My vampyric hunger on you shall feed. Form: Spenserian Sonnet Parameters: Structure: Written over 3 quatrains and a closing couplet Meter: Consistent iambic pentameter or decasyllabic lines Rhyme schema: abab bcbc cdcd ee

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Date: 5/6/2012 1:38:00 PM
Smile ˜ Hello My Dear Sweet Beautiful Lady * Wow, This Is Brilliantly Intense Amid Desires Calling; From These Depths Of Passionate Longings !! Your Beautiful Goddess & Your Neck Is Bare; Untying This Your Negligee To Feed Her Love ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 5/6/2012 4:34:00 PM
Thank you John
Date: 5/6/2012 1:22:00 PM
A vampire in love....they have to "eat", they also.... :) - well written Jemmy, like it! - oxox hugs carnivorous and vegetable - eating Anne-Lise
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 5/6/2012 4:35:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/6/2012 1:59:00 PM
...."YESSSS, 'MmM.'" *

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