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The Duel

Twenty steps, Turn and shoot, Nerves steeled, With many a toot, Pistol loaded, As am I Why do I seem, So eager to die? That fiend I face, I must prevail, So back to the bar, To enjoy more ale On step nineteen, I start to turn, Is anyone counting? Then I learn... One step ahead, Was my prey, For he had turned On step eighteen, The distance between us He had seen To outcheat a cheater, And his aim was true, His bullet ripped Through my flesh, As it was designed to do With my last breath I saw Under swirling sky This was the day, I was to die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/28/2009 10:05:00 PM
work of art.. sorry for my typo. but since it's here, I'll add the 'S' and say it's a brilliant work of SmartS too. Maybe a couple. ;)
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Date: 5/28/2009 10:04:00 PM
this is a magnificent write Tom. very well done and wow, such a powerful 'ending'. maybe that's why JB always said "On the One". ;) brilliant work of mart my friend.
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