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The Duchess I Once Knew

She's pouring from a pot of tea as we relax on the quiet porch Honeysuckle vines encircle the posts, and webs of daddy long-legs glisten in the afternoon light. She nonchalantly chatters, telling me her stories... as if they were ordinary tales which, of course, ..they are not. Sailing across an ocean during dangerous wartime, Living in exotic, but threatened tropics A life of adventure, of hardship, of fear Yet none of that revealed on her weathered face She smiles, cheeks rouged and eyes sparkling. Inside the house, the counter is cluttered with dirty dishes The floor is sticky, and dog hair floats in prisms of light The old hound sleeps in the middle of the kitchen rug. An older black lab is lapping up water from a brown dish dripping water from his sloppy face across the checkered floor. Throughout the house, a lingering musky smell of well loved pets, and a stale, smokey odor of burnt toast from her attempt at breakfast. Servants, cooks, gardeners, are now part of a long ago past. The house is filled with dust covered, treasured belongings from yesterday. Piles of clutter everywhere. Junk mail, newspapers, dog treats, documents and clippings prized antiques and artifacts On shelves, and on the walls, are sepia-hued photographs People of fame, others of family and friends... I see my own family among them. A handsome young man, and she, his bride. He would become a General. She would follow him to the ends of the earth. Their life like a story that one would read in a novel. I sit here now,...with this woman of many lives. Sitting on her porch, she wears a tattered, splattered dress. Today, she is a homespun, country widow. An extraordinary woman, this grand Duchess, yet now who bears traits of Ma Kettle She brought class, dignity, and a wealth of knowledge to our small country neighborhood,....... to my life. Here we are, together, so far from the world she once knew. We sit in the shade of her covered porch A long haired, grey cat jumps into her lap. Under the veil of a summer day I pour her another cup of tea, and a little more for myself. Tea is served....I have much more to drink in.....to savor. In memory of dear friends, most amazing people, who lived down our road ... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lester_Maitland Aviation Pioneer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/11/2010 8:00:00 AM
Carrie, what an incredible tribute and seriously beautiful write. Congrats to you, sweetest friend on your most well deserved win. To pick what we feel is best is an impossible task isn't it. You have way too many 'bests' in my humble opinion. Love and hugs to you always Carrie, you are a gift. love, shar xoxo
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Date: 6/10/2010 7:28:00 PM
Congrats on the HM win, Carrie
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Date: 6/10/2010 7:05:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in Mac's best poem contest.. enjoy another honor for another wonderful winning write.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:40:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your HM in my contest. Your Lady is a wonderful poem.
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Date: 3/16/2009 1:44:00 PM
Yup..loved this poem when I first read it.... brilliant description !
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Date: 3/14/2009 12:30:00 PM
This is great. it is the sort of poem that suggests taking the reader away to somewhere else. That there are no weak lines in this poem shows a great care and dedication from the writer and that is something to be held in high regard. the lines are stunning and have great effect (E.G.: 'She is telling me of things - as if they were ordinary tales'). The layout of the poem is excellent. One worth returning to.
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Date: 3/14/2009 11:08:00 AM
Love!!!!! this kind of poetry! mesmerizing! trully wonderful! beloved memories! Jim
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Date: 3/14/2009 10:57:00 AM
Absolutly beautiful, Carrie. She/they must have been wonderful to know. Some people touch our lives and enrich us and leave their mark upon us. Excellent piece, Carrie! I like Brians "cinema clip" idea for this lovely dedication! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/14/2009 9:27:00 AM
They used to make short films on these topics for those fill in moments at the cinema.This would make such an excellent silent movie .Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/14/2009 8:10:00 AM
well written!! you have painted a beautiful picture... so many memories can be related too... ~ Arany
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Date: 3/14/2009 1:28:00 AM
Beautiful vignette Carrie.Thank you for your blog comment today Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:36:00 PM
....Lady Kathleen and General Lester J. Maitland~Tales of love and stories told....And, it would seem but an honor to myself, to have someone as gifted, sincere and beautiful as "You," ever tell a story, about my life? Although, "Your Life," in my mind, is the true story one would want to hear I believe!!!?~Smile ~"My Love To 'You & Your Loves Always, John!!!"~"Goodnight Dear Lady!!!:):)
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:28:00 PM
Smile~What an absolutely wonderful story "Lovely, Gifted and Beautiful Carrie Richards!!!"~Again, You take us with You, into this vivid moment of friendship and human lives lived....Smile~thats all I can do sometimes when I think about "You" dear lady!!! Everything about You seems soo soft and precious....so pure and lovely!!!:):)....cont....
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Date: 3/13/2009 5:19:00 PM
A few times I have taken time to listen while people tell tales of magic. So often we look at the appearance of a woman or man that time has weathered and see nothing of value. My aunt for instance once climbed a bridge and stole a flag, she is filled with millions of colorful stories. Can you imagine the gift of sharing your life with someone interested enough to sit and listen. In the end we are the ones that would have the greater reward. Wonderful write Carrie. Living history. I loved it.
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Date: 3/13/2009 4:50:00 PM
This is an amazing piece brought to life with words that paint it so well. You are an artist with words..making them sing in harmony.
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Date: 3/13/2009 2:29:00 PM
Wow! I feel as if i were there myself! Very lovely poem! Thanks for your kind comment! Much love, ~Catherine:)
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Date: 3/13/2009 2:06:00 PM
Carrie, the description of Lady Kathleen's house made me think of my late Aunt Eva (thank you - she was beloved). I like the way this touching poem describes the transition of the grand Dutchess to Ma Kettle. Love the last line, "more to drink in...and savor." I think that sums it up quite nicely. Thank you for introducing me to this amazing woman! Love, Carolyn
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