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The Drunk

He dances to the Rythm of wine His movements unsteady Pushed to and fro by the wind Like a child learning How to walk He rises and fall All eyes is fixed On him Suddenly he becomes An entertainer All enjoy his Stupid act. The path to his home He cannot find In the gutter he finds A new home The stones he uses as pillows He is freed from the thoughts of life.

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Skat A

Date: 8/3/2013 9:24:00 PM

the poem is amazing... Dumejes,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/3/2013 5:32:00 AM

good morning Dumejes, I was very entertained by this drunk, and his way of the child. locked will keep him safe. love the poem, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@. ...

Dumejes Momalife
Date: 8/3/2013 2:32:00 PM

Thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/3/2013 3:30:00 AM

Hello new member: Dumejes. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dumejes Momalife
Date: 8/3/2013 2:33:00 PM

Thanks