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THE DRILL Arrive with boots. The march early or late. The rose-fed cheeks. The eyes are green - new leaves. The cadence call. No turning back. Blank slate. New beginnings. In adventures, believes. On the clothesline, strung together, the bras. In the barracks, she-decorations hang. The flag flies high. Painting of Betsy Ross. Put together - this puzzle’s unlikely gang. The coins bouncing. We ban undoing beds. The quickest wash. The reveille’s real. Back to the grind. Rote march from the beachheads. Us she-sailors, we salute-shine…we heel. We learn the drill - this camp is not playing. We’re uniform - there’s no place for straying. 5/26/2023

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Date: 5/28/2023 9:08:00 PM
I love this Naval reprise, Kim. And you are certainly the one to pen it, as you've walked the walk! Here's to the WAVEs, as I think the female Naval personnel used to be called! Excelsior! ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 5:24:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend! :)
Date: 5/28/2023 10:05:00 AM
A Memorial Day tribute to the ladies of the US Navy, I salute you. Thank you for your service, Kim Rodrigues! What experiences you must have had, please more, I need to know more. Lol. I wanted to join around 21, but the policy then, adoption for the babies I wasn't ready for that. Then things changed for me. I always regret not joining the service, I really needed discipline! ;D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2023 10:29:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anaya! I never thought I would but my dad mentioned it to me. It is one of the highlights of my life!

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