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The Drifter

for but a moment
the moon shall rest on the sea
drifting with the tide

Written for Raul's contest.
I love that picture Raul -

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  1. Date: 4/21/2010 2:14:00 PM
    I never saw the picture, but this is a wonderful 'universal' Haiku. Chris.

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 5:38:00 PM
    so lovely! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 2:30:00 PM
    Very nice Haiku Michael, well deserved of your 2nd place in Raul's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 12/19/2009 2:32:00 AM
    Congratulations Michael, on your success in Raul’s Reflections contest with this skillful poem. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 12/10/2009 11:10:00 AM
    Love this one for even without the picture I could picture it. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

  1. Date: 12/10/2009 8:30:00 AM
    May your poetry blossom in many directions in2010 Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 5:11:00 AM
    "It is better late than never", they say. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Raul's "Reflections" Contest! Well-deserved! Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 1:41:00 AM
    This is powerful, Michael. All the best in the contest. It is so good to know that fire burns with love in your belly still, my friend. Bravo!

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 4:04:00 PM
    Michael, surely, this is one of the finest haiku's I have had the immense pleasure of reading! fav! many congrats! jimbo

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 12:57:00 PM
    Congratulations on your second palce finish in Raul's Reflection contest!

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 8:38:00 AM
    Beuatiful, Michael. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 7:51:00 PM
    I totally agree with you, MJ, that picture is just beautiful and your haiku captures that enchanting fleeting moment like the camera captured that scene--congrats on your win in Raul's contest! Enjoy your day!

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 4:47:00 PM
    Awesome win Michael. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 4:19:00 PM
    Awesome Haiku , Michael. Congratulations ! _Robert

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 1:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on winning in Raul's contest! What a beautiful haiku! ~Juliane

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 1:41:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's Contest! Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 8:28:00 AM
    Well, you havent lost your touch! Michael, this is beautiful and Im so happy for your success in the contest. BG

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 8:05:00 AM
    nicely penned, congrats on the win!!

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 7:47:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Michael.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 7:28:00 AM
    Congratulations to you my neighbor! 2nd place!!! A beautiful haiku and a peaceful picture of the moon! Lovely!! Love, Carrie