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Slinky green silk cut dangerously high. Skin pale as milk; a glimpse of white thigh. Swinging and clinging to hips that sway, Thin fabric skimming; legs on display. Shining gold hair, swept up in soft waves. Florid yet fair: bare shoulders, smooth planes. Sending bold glances, sneaking smug smiles, Dangling chances with feminine wiles. I must confess, without guilt or regret, I wore this dress just to make you sweat. I must confess, this is all a ruse - I wore this dress just to torture you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/9/2013 8:43:00 PM
At 78, Heather it is not fair to torture the elderly, but such a great job of writing. I forgive you. Outstanding and flows gently. Good Write.
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Date: 4/4/2013 5:53:00 PM
Very well scribed Heather. Your poetry has a magical element. Love the subject and imagery in this one also.
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Date: 3/22/2013 4:18:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 3/22/2013 6:00:00 AM
I remember loving this the first time...HOT MOMMA!....haha. Congrats!
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Date: 3/21/2013 9:29:00 PM
lol...love this one... Heather,, Congratulations, with your winning poem. Thank you for supporting my "Green" contest. Always :-) Linda
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Date: 2/28/2013 7:34:00 AM
You have made me smile! Provocative with just enough sweetness to be alluring.
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Date: 2/27/2013 8:32:00 PM
: ) Ah, What's a girl to do, Heather..they say, if you've got it, flaunt it! Girls, just having fun LOL! Love it! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/27/2013 8:13:00 AM
Womens ways are so contrary.
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Heather Ober
Date: 2/27/2013 8:37:00 AM
It may seem that way, but there is method to our madness - when we get burned, we find creative ways to burn right back!
Date: 2/27/2013 6:02:00 AM
haha...I'll take some of that torture any day...Great work!
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Date: 2/26/2013 5:02:00 PM
So this is what you have been up to so that you forgot to check your inbox! I like how you start lines with stressed syllables, as unstressed seems to be more popular. (Soupmail.)
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Date: 2/26/2013 7:52:00 AM
And now I lost my trust in you
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Date: 2/25/2013 6:07:00 PM
Um, Heather...did you ever take the time to consider the fact that you might be torturing others as well?...I am very disappointed in you...how could you?..I'm an old man and my heart...
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Heather Ober
Date: 2/25/2013 6:24:00 PM
Haha! Sorry, Tim! My bad :)
Date: 2/25/2013 3:04:00 PM
WOW< this is so cool. I LOVE that ending on it. Great to see one like this from you, so flirty!!
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Heather Ober
Date: 2/26/2013 7:23:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea :) My flirty side likes to come out once in awhile!
Date: 2/25/2013 11:47:00 AM
Heather please no more torture, leave me with some dreams lol....David
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Heather Ober
Date: 2/25/2013 6:26:00 PM
Haha I'm sorry, David. Next time I'll add a warning at the beginning of my poem. "Men beware" ;)
Date: 2/25/2013 10:53:00 AM
And they enjoy every minute of it! :-)
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Heather Ober
Date: 2/26/2013 7:22:00 AM
I like to think so! ;)
Date: 2/25/2013 10:32:00 AM
You naughty girl, you! LOL Great write, Heather. Love, Kim
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Heather Ober
Date: 2/26/2013 7:21:00 AM
Haha thanks, Kim. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 2/25/2013 10:07:00 AM
YOU GO GIRL!!!! :) Torture till you achieve the goal of capitulation! ;) Lovely write! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
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Heather Ober
Date: 2/26/2013 7:21:00 AM
Thanks, Eileen :)

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