The Dream Don'T Wake Up

the dream don't wake up sleep dream run away to beach.... in real life run run

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Justin Bordner

Date: 8/31/2012 4:37:00 PM

I do try to cherrish my dream lessons and respites too Sara - lightning looks better from the beach rather than from being on the doldrum - J.A.B. %

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/21/2012 4:14:00 PM

Run to the beach, but don't go into the water. No lifeguard is present. Good write Sara.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/21/2012 2:11:00 PM

yes, such truth here, my friend

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/21/2012 12:24:00 PM

Dream's reality wonderfully worded. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2012 8:56:00 PM

yes, we are running helter skelter in our real lives, Sara. You sure got that right!!

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/20/2012 4:08:00 PM

Ok...the beach is a place where things get washed away, so if the dream goes there no telling there will be any remains. All depends on what the dream is though. Hope your dreams are good one. All the best Sara. One love. Joy Wells

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/20/2012 3:44:00 PM

This is an interesting write my friend! Incredibly written Sara! I enjoyed reading this afternoon! Great Work!!