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The Dream

“The Dream” i am young. the window in my room is open. the blinds flicker as the summer nights breeze blows in. i open my eyes awakened by the noise. as i peer out into the night a street light fizzles and burns the darkness away. i am now in the street. . . i look to the west down the long gray path. in the distance another light begins to burn. i see movement. i struggle to make out the figure. an old woman approaches from the side. she looks weak. covered in a white gown. it gently flows in the wind as she limps her way to the middle of the road. suddenly she stops. after what seems like minutes she slowly turns. she is off in the distance but i can now make out her features. she has a look of calm on her face. she starts to mumble. i can’t make out what she is saying. her lips continue to move. her face begins to crack with frustration. the veins in her neck bulge and pulse. her eyes widen and blacken. she is off in the distance but her face is so clear. she is screaming into the night air but no sounds are being made. her face shows her strain but no words are heard. and in an instant she is face to face with me. mouth agape. her breath pushing against mine. eyes black and veins shivering. then, i awake from the dream. laying in my bed. i am left wondering. when will i have the dream again…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/23/2014 4:52:00 PM
Joel,, Congratulations, In Regina's "Special Memory" contest..... Have a nice one, LINDA
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Date: 9/22/2014 2:16:00 PM
Yikes I wish you pleasant dreams! ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved top of the class win! Pandita
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Date: 9/20/2014 1:51:00 PM
Hi Joel, this is such a deep powerful piece! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita
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Date: 9/19/2014 10:18:00 AM
An amazing memory, dream,, or nightmare.......one cannot decide which it is....but wonderful poetry! Well done!
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Date: 9/19/2014 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joel. I hope that dream never came back other then in memories.
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Date: 9/19/2014 5:18:00 AM
Lovely dream well told, Joel. congrats
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Date: 9/18/2014 4:24:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Joel - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2014 5:51:00 PM
Joel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/15/2014 12:45:00 PM
Wow very intense dream Mr.Dallas....Very griping-Love Ettie
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