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The Dream

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The Dream

Sensations is the word for the entire treasure, And life is what allows to say That feeling every single pleasure, Makes people find their dream away. And in that dream they put desire, And they put hope for every scent, And all the senses we admire And never let their will to bend. The so called peace that all we need, The so called light we're searching for, That's what the dream is for indeed That's what we all have dreamed before. And when the light's about to reach, And when the peace it's on it's way You feel the kind in every speech And bless you find in every pray. The blind can see the stars that dance, The deaf can hear the wind that sings, And every whisper is a trance That makes even the rocks find wings. And when the dream is no more pain, And all the chains are no more doubt, You know your heart contains a stain And that the dream is love about. 01/13/2008

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  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Very well done Raluca! The dream does not often turn to reality but it is what keeps hope alive. I love how you've managed to rhyme so effortlessly - it adds a smooth flow to the poem that makes it very pleasurable to read. I'm looking forward to read more from you.

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:24:00 PM
    Nicely done poet

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:22:00 AM
    I am stopping back to see if you have added any new poems to your list. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry with the world Raluca. You have taken a big step here and I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will check back again another day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:11:00 PM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Raluca. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:42:00 AM
    wonderful write Raluca,welcome to the Soup,with this well written piece

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    Date: 10/14/2012 5:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Richard, its good to be here!
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 5:54:00 PM
    Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job :)

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    Date: 10/13/2012 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Sabrina, i appreciate it! :*