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The Dream

In my dream, the sun was a god, The moon smiles and gave me a nod, The stars turned to shining dust, Which scraped off of metal as I watched it rust. Then a fire started out of a spark, The obscure dream went all dark, I woke up looking at the wall, The real world felt so small! *Not sure what kind of poem this is... help?*

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Date: 2/13/2016 9:15:00 AM
Viola, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/8/2011 5:43:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Viola. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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