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The Downside

love's crude and aching curse ~ longing for the heart that can't be yours… love’s righteous reprimand ~ letting the lifetime roll with the wrong hand…

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Date: 11/16/2023 2:23:00 AM
Like the song says, "and if you can't be with the one you love, honey, love the one your with" A sad one Maggie:(
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Date: 11/15/2023 10:42:00 AM
Unrequited love is the saddest love of all. Nice monos
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Date: 11/15/2023 10:32:00 AM
Poignant and truthful piece, ML. :o)
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Date: 11/15/2023 8:33:00 AM
Excellent thoughts portrayed here - well written
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