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The Door To Forever

It was such a small thing It happens all the time Fathers and sons disagree Fathers and sons argue Fathers and sons say things Things they don't really mean... We exchanged words Harsh words over nothing, nothing at all Childish words over petty differences Angry words which are critical so critical now to recall and to relive over and over again… You were ready to drop the matter You were ready to relent and apologize I was not ready to drop the matter I was not ready to relent and apologize You were the adult, I was the child I reversed the roles, you reversed them back You wanted to relent. I refused to relent I refused and let you walk out that door Yes, I let you walk out that door That front door, that door to forever the last time I didn't say goodbye to you the last time I didn't say I love you the last time I saw you the last time I saw you alive…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/1/2015 7:54:00 AM
Excellent poem Tim. Some choices follow us through our lives.
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Date: 10/5/2015 2:46:00 PM
Yes Tim, a choice can haunt us forever. There will always be regrets. We can only try to learn from them and change our behavior going forward. But do we not suffer by what we have done out of a flood of emotion that we could not help at the time? Thank-you for letting me think upon this. It is a very healing thing to think upon this and possibly forgive ourselves.
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Date: 9/14/2015 12:48:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your win, in Edward Ebbs choice contest. SKAT
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Date: 9/13/2015 4:27:00 PM
Dear Tim, this is such a sad write full of regrets for taking the low road. I too have been guilty of making the wrong choice in a similar situation and wish that I could take it all back and right the wrong I committed. Unfortunately, it is too late. But I did learn a valuable lesson from all that. Congratulations my friend on your win, a 7, and a fav! In my estimation, you are a most talented poet and you continue to reflect excellence in all your work! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 9/13/2015 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations, my dear friend! I would have rated this one MUCH higher.
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Date: 9/13/2015 8:44:00 AM
A good presentation of a hard fact of life! Congrats on your win, Tim! Balveen
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Date: 9/12/2015 5:23:00 AM
Heartfelt n emotive write Tim! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/11/2015 11:57:00 PM
Thank you for your entry Tim and congrats on your Honorable Mention!
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Date: 9/11/2015 7:06:00 AM
Oh, Tim... This is heart wrenching. You have brought tears to my eyes, and I very rarely cry. The idea of making a choice without realizing it is a choice really hits home for me. I wish I could give you a big hug right now.
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Date: 9/11/2015 3:19:00 AM
oh Tim this is simply heartbreaking - my heart goes out to you my friend:-( hugs jan xx
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