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The Disposables

Silence It literally smothered us, that still ambiance of the day— The cruel, frustrating uncertainty of it all In silence, many glistening eyes filled with pain and tears Gazed feverishly toward the dark blankets of slightly parted cloud The bright nebulas of spiraling light, Once seen by the adversaries, Were no more Yet still, we waited like starving animals, Wishing…waiting to be fed the truth. Nothing came of course, save the silence. We are the disposables They take our loved ones into the skies And leave us here like trash No one knows whom they will choose next, And what happens when they are torn away from mankind If only we knew they were safe and sound— If only we had a slight idea of what they were But they leave no trace of what they are Neither of why they do what they do Some say they are aliens, Taking humans for experimental purposes, Or various other reasons unknown to us Some even believe they are angels, Carrying off the fortunate ones to safety and celestial life And then there are the more pessimistic, religious priests That swear upon their hearts not to intervene with the situation, Claiming these mysterious others to be the Devil’s disciples… And that’s the thing that gets to us all, Though some may hate to admit it No one really knows. But at least we know who we are Don’t we? June 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/27/2016 8:28:00 PM
Had to read this twice, Laura. Very deep and contemplative. Have you ever read War of the Worlds (or perhaps the movie)...? They had a priest in the story that believed the Martian Invaders were a judgement of God's wrath "Claiming these mysterious others to be the Devil's disciples" .... kinda reminded me of that. Your switch up at the end was awesome ... the universe is so mysterious, and yet just because of day-to-day routine we trick ourselves into thinking "we" aren't just as mysterious ...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/28/2016 5:58:00 PM
I've been meaning to read that book. Havent gotten to it yet! :) Thank you for readin this one! I feel like this one sort of sounded lik a preface to a mystery novel or somethin. ~Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/27/2016 8:33:00 PM
I like to see the more off-the-wall topics such as this ... it can make for some captivating reading, thinking about these things! P.S. I wonder where the whole, "Aliens beaming up cows" came from?
Date: 9/6/2015 6:04:00 PM
Cute, and I got a chuckle at the end. You summarized the philosophical state of humankind, and you did as good a job as the greatest philosophers. So, you were pretty advanced in 2010, and must be even better now. So we know that we shall never know!!!, and that shall we say is that! It is fun to think about though. Perhaps there will be a breakthrough--NOT!!
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Date: 8/26/2015 8:10:00 PM
Interesting indeed...I do believe there are others...angels and aliens out there but since there is no concrete evidence, I keep my thoughts to myself. I don't know about being "disposable" though...:-))) Everything in its own time. You keep the reader thinking, my friend...hugs!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/27/2015 9:16:00 AM
Ah.... work....well, I do think either way, you are a talented, productive woman and poet! Thanks for the huggses. :) ~Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/26/2015 8:17:00 PM
I see... It's good to keep an open mind I think... thank you for taking the time to read, Kim. I hope you are having a great week so far. ~Laura
Date: 8/26/2015 6:39:00 AM
Nice write!!! I hope you will stop pass sometime and take a look at some of my work. I think you might enjoy "Moon light" and a couple of others. I hope to see you there. Have a great day!!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/26/2015 7:39:00 AM
Thank you, April, I sure will!!~Laura

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