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The Difference Between Me and You

Why you keep reminding me of the difference between you and me ? I'm young and your old - isn't that what you've told ... I'm stupid and your so clever - well that just caused me a shiver ... Why do you keep putting judgments and building walls between us - why your being too cruel ? You know how much I care about you but you keep avoiding me - you keep acting like a fool... I know you hate this word but can't you take a joke ? Or you just love to hurt me - you love to see me broke ?

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White Sage

Date: 1/18/2016 5:23:00 PM

YOUNG should work...the poem's got me wondering, you've put in such strength that you survived...excellent poem D

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/18/2016 6:33:00 PM

Lol , This is fictional though thank you for your delightful comment, hugs / / :)

Skat A

Date: 12/17/2015 10:09:00 PM

Dalia, WOW,, I remember when I was young, I would treat everyone OLD. LOL. I guess I was the opposite. But, I never did it to leave he/she broke. Just did not like getting to know older folks when I was young. Sad to see someone put an age gap between friends... Love SKAT

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/18/2015 6:16:00 AM

Yes my dear he's older than me and he keeps treating me like a fool and he call himself a friend , I don't get it ...Anyways thanks my dear for stopping by I really do appreciate it....hugs / / :D