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there’s a seismic gap between the then and now i see it widen with every gaping breath working your way to the other world the fog is clearing the bridge appearing that’s it the time has come you’re leaving me hardly by choice goodbye to dreams we shared just one more i love you another smile one more connection as nightfall descends i hear the moon beckon AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on April 15, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on February 23, 2021

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Date: 4/18/2021 9:41:00 AM
wow, what a gem here . Love this!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2021 9:50:00 AM
thank you very much, Andrea~
Date: 4/18/2021 1:06:00 AM
A very beautiful poem filled with emotions Line. Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! Blessings xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2021 8:54:00 AM
Thanks, Connie. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/16/2021 10:38:00 PM
So beautifully and metaphorically portrayed! Congrats on your win, Line! A favourite
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2021 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment. Most appreciated ~

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