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The Deterioration of Distant Deities In a Vicious Solvent

What do you need? Loneliness Behind your heart’s curtain Standing defiant Kneeling slowly Flowers of hope We have sowed in flesh Withering Under narcissistic necessity In An atmosphere Made for self protection Clouds consisting of consciousness Evaporating Lost like empathy Apocalyptic accusations Fingers of fate pointed Producing Stressful souls Sharp words Rip and tear All meaning That lives When your eyes open Let me burrow To secrets Held so close Gasping for your breath And dying for your life Let me in

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Date: 3/9/2011 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Julian. Love Carol
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Date: 12/14/2010 8:56:00 AM
Julian, This is interesting, intriguing! This write has so many meanings... I read it 3 times and it meant something each read...Great job. Congrats on your feature! Lay
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Julian. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 7:43:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Julian. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:46:00 AM
Well expresswed and nicely worded write, Julian
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Date: 9/30/2010 8:31:00 PM
interesting write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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