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The Depraved

dont understand and cant stand cruel hearts and for the most part dont care too im not like you dont miscontrue the way i feel to be real mean cuz i mean, look u stay a closed book take a look at yourself its unhealthy to bottle up inside and hide from everyone you gotta outrun your fears years coulda been saved tears coulda been saved depraved minded all this time not thinking it a crime to hurt those around you but its true that indeed that the innocent bleed at your feet defeated and breathless hopeless and lost at the cost of what? your pleasure? there is no measure of how digusted i am and i am disgusted at the very least at how you feast on others' pain and embarrassment whether thats how you vent or not you think your a big shot taking cheap shots bullying your way thru life well you feel good? you feel empowered?? Well all i see is a hopeless weak coward. Tamara Brown Feb 3, 2011

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Date: 6/29/2011 4:16:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tamara. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Tamara Brown
Date: 6/30/2011 12:04:00 AM
thank you :) My sisters name is Carol Brown, very weird! lol.
Date: 6/29/2011 2:23:00 AM
Good concept, great rhythm, poor grammar, but for some reason I feel as though it just doesn't matter in this piece. Well done x
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Tamara Brown
Date: 6/30/2011 12:04:00 AM
thank you for your honest opinion! :)

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