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The Deposition By Michelangelo

The Deposition by Michelangelo He could not stop once he began the work Of shaping a most painful scene in stone For the whole world to see and remember Hoping they will feel what he felt so strong Jesus, His life offered as sacrifice Sorrow filled eyes of those who had been there Haunting dreams invading his sleep at night Feeling deep inside, the pain and despair And he knew it had become a mission To bring to life in marble, his vision. It must have been a Friday quite chilly For the bodies of those carrying Him Are covered from head to toe heavily Yet just pieces of clothes are seen on Him Perhaps awkwardly placed around in haste By Mary Magdalene or His mother Agony written all over her face. Yet clearly perceived upon their features I see traces of their love for Jesus Not escaping those of Nicodemus. Nicodemus, a man who knew the Lord Devastated by the horror he’d seen. Michelangelo worked the marble long Shaping the pain stricken face of his dreams Taking a step back, had carved his own face Had seen himself help the crying women Take down Jesus’ heavy and lifeless frame. Dropped his tool, overcome with emotion Unable to continue, kneeled down to pray Left it unfinished; “The Deposition”. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 12.14.09 Note: This is the first time I write in the Ekphrasis form, so I am not sure I have done this right, but I did want to challenge myself to write. Please feel free to critique and make suggestions where it needs improvement. Also, the third verse, line 5 and 6 came from my imagination. I do not know if the face of Nicodemus is Michelangelo's, but somehow I felt compelled to write that. Thank you for reading, Caroline.

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Date: 12/19/2009 10:31:00 AM
YOU CERTAINLY DID DO IT RIGHT dear Caroline. Sensational Ekphrasis! Congratulation on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:13:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Caroline.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/19/2009 7:30:00 AM
What an amazing depiction of this piece of art....you have written a compelling poem, and so well deserving a win in this challenge! Well done, Caroline...Congratulations!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/19/2009 7:07:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved win for an excellent entry... blessings... luv.. and thankxxx for your kind comments on my poetry always... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 12/19/2009 4:54:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest Caroline, Merry Christmas >> James
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Date: 12/19/2009 3:03:00 AM
Caroline, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 12/18/2009 7:45:00 PM
I love this Caroline...it's beautiful...It's a winner in my book...Really enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 12/18/2009 7:45:00 PM
Oh and good luck in the contest....Marty
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Date: 12/18/2009 7:34:00 AM
I don't know either Caroline. But we must write what is flowing from the heart, for the mind is not it's judge, but rather it's servant. Expect mysterious, unexplained miracles this Christmas, for this year is a year that has brought prefection into view. This is something I begin to feel the need to say,as I was reading you poem, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 12/16/2009 5:40:00 AM
Excellent job and beautiful poetry from your pen Caroline.. tis was very challenging to write about such a beautiful masterpiece.. good luck in Raul's contest.. my entry is Manifesto and I also have never written in this poetry style and form so Raul has offered a learning curve as well as a challenge to explore our talents... much success with your entry... blessings... luv... and thankxxx for your kind comments on my poetry today... Linda-Marie
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Date: 12/15/2009 4:23:00 PM
Wonderful entry for Raul's contest! Good luck, and thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry ~Juliane
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:05:00 AM
Thank you for this excellent poem you shared with us today Caroline. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2009 4:52:00 PM
You really bring the artist's passion to life in this write, Caroline, and allow the reader to experience the emotions he must have felt while creating this masterpiece. Love the way you tell us who Michelangelo had actually "carved his own face." Didn't know that! I'm not very famiiar with Ephrasis either, Caroline, but Brian seems to be a master of all styles. Maybe he'll offer some input. Enjoyed this work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/14/2009 4:08:00 PM
Very welld escribes the carving in terms of what you felt impressed on you in seeing the work. I am not one to say on the style for I don't know. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Good luck in the contest and should do well. Sara
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