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The Departure

When the soul departs, All things are falling apart. I am breaking up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/16/2022 1:12:00 PM
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oh it looks like a haiku (senryu) . I really like this, Sunita.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/17/2022 5:57:00 AM
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Hi dear thks. I was trying to compose a haiku but i missed some syllables. Ha ha ha ...Sunita UPD
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Buhagiar Victor
Date: 8/14/2022 10:55:00 PM
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Dying is separation of body and soul. Find bliss.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/17/2022 5:58:00 AM
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Thks...yes the process is what ive tried to describe. :) Have recomposed to fit a senryu...Sunita UPD
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Weston Gregory
Date: 8/14/2022 7:37:00 PM
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Such depth, wow.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/17/2022 5:59:00 AM
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Hi thanks. Your words mean a lot.:) Sunita UPD

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