The Dentist

the dentist discussing my treatment - - his bottom plate moves

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/3/2011 3:11:00 PM

I love the way you interjected some humor into a painful visit to the dentist, Charles. A friend of mine is headed to the dentist Friday. I'd like to share this with her if you don't mind. She needs major work done and this might give her a laugh. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2011 11:05:00 PM

this is human nature AND comical, charles. So by your own different definitions you gave me in my comment box and at the blog, it could be either senryu OR haiku. I guess I am seeing you do differently here than what you are asking for in the contest (also, which is strictly 5/7/5)It's all very confusing for me. I want to do your contest correctly, but that kigo link totally overwhelms me and is discouraging me now from doing it. You can soupmail me to explain better. Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2011 10:19:00 PM

hahaha this one is funny to me. Once again, why don't you call this senryu?