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The Deepest Ocean....

Walking along the warm sands of the shoreline My black Belgian shepherd by my side Sea lions barking, sea gulls flying, towards the sailboats beyond the inlet Pondering the solipsism, amid soliloquy divisions.... While the winter sun, shines down its solace As I glance toward the southeast, and beyond its distant horizon Knowing, within my pulsing raspberry heart, which pounds for her, these melodies For it is somewhere there, beneath the whispering wooded trees Where she wakes, she creates, she believes, and, she breathes.... In this maya of a moment I can see her White silken dress, atop her golden pristine flesh Blowing gently in this breeze, like an Angel within a dream.... Her rubious red lips, and her glistening strawberry auburn hair, flowing Within this deja vu premonition she smiles, this certain, glowing gleam As her endless chocolate eyes, blink, beneath her heavenly painted lashes While bluebirds and red breasted robins gather, with all of nature, roundabout her side.... Solomons-seal upon my palm, holding the infloressence, as the Parus bicolor begins to sing, its lullaby Tinnitus sounds that twinkle in time, calling, as Tinkerbell, slowly fades away ~ Beyond these tangerine skies so close, inside, these blueberry wanting scenes Where her words chime, to a longing heart that beats, resounding, from this rising sea.... I bleed, as I fight this space which lies between us For in my soul, today, she is all that I can see! Dare I tell her that I love her? Dare I ask her to join me, within my own world? Walking along the shoreline, my shepherd by my side, boats beyond the inlet, sea gulls in flight Pondering the solipsism, amid soliloquy divisions.... While the winter sun, shines down its solace And I smile, within this deja vu premonition, of what dreams, may someday be? Tinkerbell dancing, dressed, in blueberries tangerine ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Within, the deepest ocean....

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Date: 7/7/2009 12:37:00 PM
this is outstanding,beautiful,a gem-this lavished poem melts hearts,so romantic and passionate and this woman in your view must be very lucky---beautiful john,beautiful verses of love,you should tell her that you love her,lucky woman she is,surrounded by a mystery of who this woman is ,this angel in white,and these prince's words will steal her heart--love charma
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Date: 6/28/2009 5:55:00 PM
sorry dear friend john didnt get your mail--and i agree with charlene under,thanks for the abundance of compliments on our writing--you are a good friend to all--goodnight--charma
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Date: 6/26/2009 7:59:00 AM
Each image that you describe so vividly you can hear the waves of the ocean, hear the sea gulls, and sea lions, this is vivid and again a romantic write, although I detect a sadness within these beautifulll crafted lines. The magic of your pen always amazes! Love, Charlene
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Date: 6/11/2009 8:35:00 PM
From beginning to end I get so twisted up in your beautiful, magical words dear John, Your picture painted canvases are amazing and I too am proud to call you friend. Thank you for lavishng me with an abundance of compliments on my writing John, really I am so touched and overwhelemed that you like my work. Your wonderful comments keep the spirits lifted so thank you again John.
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Date: 2/20/2009 12:52:00 PM
Wow this John is a side to you we don't see colorful ,romantic, wonderful in-depth story of love and treasure. I can see it now as the waves wash away. Laura :) I hope this went into my contest?
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Date: 2/18/2009 12:57:00 PM
I wish I was walking along the ocean shore instead of shoveling snow. What a beautiful writer you are John God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/17/2009 9:58:00 AM
hiya John, i have had probs with the poetry site, we think of you too, I will write again as soon as i can, anyway take care love diane Gof bless you
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Date: 2/17/2009 3:12:00 AM
Beautiful words. John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/17/2009 2:28:00 AM
Thank you for commenting on my work. This write is so vivid it keeps ones mind working. Your words flow so easily from this work to my soul. Thank you for sharing, I can almost feel the warm sand beneath my feet. I look forward to catching up as I have been away for a while and I see you have written many. Smiles from Lolita have a great day!
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Date: 2/15/2009 11:15:00 AM
John, I wish I could walk with you and hear first-hand your eloquent observations. Thanks so much for your input on "Mideast Military Madness." Ever since I heard about the suicide problem among American soldiers, I have not been able to get it off of my mind. You are gifted! Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2009 10:31:00 AM
This write is so vivid, I can see you, and your black Belgain Shepherd walking by your side, as the water rushes in, and out, I see you with your pants rolld up almost to your knees, walking barefoot, wind in your hair, and distant love in your heart...this is the picture I am seeing....I loved this, always, Christy
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Date: 2/15/2009 9:48:00 AM
This is an incredible write John. Your creativity shines through so wonderfully. I was getting lost in the beauty of this piece..words flowing through you brother drawing in readers to live for a moment in your words. Well done and thanks for the uplifting words my friend.
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Date: 2/15/2009 8:42:00 AM
I love reading these tender sides of John Rhinem, so beautiful and mystical....it is like looking at a lovely painting, with soft colors of the rainbow...like a glimpse of heaven , filled with a loving heart. Wonderful! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 2/15/2009 8:05:00 AM
This is a Beautiful write, John. Your imagery is brilliant and phrasing is equally so. A poem of dreams and tender longings. Lovely! Thank you for your wonderful comments. There is good advice in Mamas Warning but I mostly wrote it for fun being thus inspired by the world around me. Had fun writing it and my daughter sings it well. So much truth in your comment about the want it fast and now attitude. Sad. Instead of a passage I suggest reading Bulwark by Brian Strand. Says it all! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/15/2009 7:44:00 AM
Beautifully composed John! So Valentine, the "raspberry heart".:) Your words have created a peaceful setting amidst "sea lions barking, sea gulls flying". The auditory and visual ambience is a spectacular background for your musing thoughts! Wishfully whimscal, tender and sweet...a pleasant and pleasurable read. An outstanding write, John! Wishing you and yours the best..God's blessings! Love to you, Mikki
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Date: 2/15/2009 5:41:00 AM
John your descriptions so vivid the shore, the shepherds and the boats you have a good life. Laurie
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Date: 2/14/2009 11:22:00 PM
A very lovely write. So descriptive I could visualize the scene. Loved it!
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