Get Your Premium Membership

The Death of Me

the death of me is but a whistle in the air the whistle near but far it is unpredictable life as we know does not really show for the death of me is near I hate it I love it im all above it hating life is untrue for you would not read this you have a life don't lose it you have a body don't bruise it you have a family don't hurt it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/9/2014 12:26:00 AM
Dylan, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2014 11:54:00 AM
This is very deep Dylan,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2014 7:28:00 AM
W~elcome to poetrysoup. E~mblem of the best poetry website which gives you; l~ove that comes from richness of her words, c~ourage to harden your faith against writer's block, o~rientation toward being the best bard, m~emories about famous poems and poets. E~mbrace this lovely website KENNEDY T~his is a caring community o~f all pleasant poems and prettiest poets. P~oet is a bard known for his o~rderly composition of words to e~ncourage love and peace, t~ransparent truth and reality, r~hymes of time and beauty of nature, y~ellowjournalism and comedy. S~oup is what we dissolve our food with. O~ne who dissolve his life in poetry soup will be u~pgraded.Please KENNEDY cook for the world; "p~oetrysoup"
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2014 4:00:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Dylan :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/17/2014 12:09:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Dylan. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. Enjoy!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/17/2014 7:57:00 AM
Dylan,, love life, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Date: 6/17/2014 6:58:00 AM
Hello Dylan, Welcome to Poetry Soup, you have joined a family of great thinkers who will speak to your heart, encourage you and enjoy your talent I will definitely be among those who will not stop to read your work Hope this journey will lead you to your goal As for your first poem, I love it … welcome to the sweet side of the world Your new PS friend .… R. Roger. C
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things