The Death Angel

It was dark as night and i almost lost my sight. I rose from my bed to see a dreadful sight. a young girl dressed in black pitch black wings and eyes of a cat The moon oh so bright "What are you doing here at this late hour?" she simplaly replies "im here to take your life" Within a few moments i lost my breath. its all over now im greeting Death.

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Skat A

Date: 5/6/2016 11:55:00 AM

M.H.C, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. **skat**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2016 6:13:00 PM

nice to read this poem again

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2015 1:59:00 PM

Miss Horror, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/8/2015 12:20:00 PM

WOW, love the dark taste. Miss Horror, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT