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On some days it will rear its ugly head to disconcert when all around seems fine, and offer choices different instead from those I've made to build this life of mine. It teases in the street, a passing glance, a burst of laughter, glimpse of sparkling eyes, two kissing lovers, bathing in romance, hid in plain sight, and cleverly disguised. Could this thing be the love I should have known, am I in the wrong lane, on the wrong wave, must it snap at my heels, future unknown and torment my decisions to the grave? You play the hand you're given, it's your call or never get to play the game at all. For contest 'New Sonnets only', sponsor Emile Pinet August 19th 2018

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Date: 9/8/2018 5:16:00 PM
Congrats on your podium win with this lovely poem, Viv. Well penned.
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Date: 9/2/2018 6:31:00 AM
You contemplate on the 'ifs' of what life could have been, had different choices been made. On hindsight it is easy to be wise (or unwise)!! I dig your end couplet. Congratulations on your merited podium finish, Viv. Regards // paul
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/2/2018 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Paul, I'd give doubting Thomas a run for his money. Thanks for popping by. Hope you're all well. regards, Viv
Date: 9/1/2018 9:52:00 PM
Excellent sonnet Viv and wonderful placement! Congratulations! : )
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/2/2018 1:02:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, I'm humbled. It got off to a bad start and I sort of cobbled it together. Viv x
Date: 9/1/2018 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations Viv! Your poem has placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/2/2018 1:02:00 AM
Thanks, Emile, very kind. Enjoyed the challenge. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/23/2018 9:51:00 PM
G'day Viv … you've really got it with sonnets haven't you. The topic, rhyme, and mood are so well presented - well done again Viv - Lindsay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/2/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay, I have to admit it's my favourite form. regards, Viv
Date: 8/19/2018 5:35:00 PM
Excellent content and composition. Well done sir.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/2/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thanks, Luke, much appreciated. regards, Viv

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