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The Deadly Seven

The deadly seven Although engulfed in sea's stormy stride, even the killer tides failed to eat false pride, Living entirely in self, want and greed, creating divide in name of colour, caste and creed, Kindness, sincerity and love that were must, through entire life we were wrapped up in lust, No help came as ship dwindled for an anchor, Despair floated as we sank in our own anger, As if born to live forever, nurtured gluttony, Ate up resources and nature's harmony, Sparked the green eyed monster in malignity, Friends surpassing, blazing embers of envy, Not working hard as the worthy, lying in sloth, Losing effervescence and expecting froth, Only if a man could shun the deadly seven, will open the golden gates to serene heaven. Written Jan 30th, 2016 For contest by John lawless Contest judged- Feb 25th, 2016 Awarded N/A Now entered for "Second chance 2" poetry contest by Eve

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Date: 6/18/2016 2:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2016 5:48:00 AM
Love that you have described the effect these seven have on us and our surroundings.. Masterfully written dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 2/10/2016 2:29:00 PM
You describe these sins well, Upma, and while we read we cannot but stop to ponder on how they effect us....are we guilty...are we innocent... hmmm ~ All the best. // paul
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Date: 2/9/2016 4:11:00 PM
Brilliantly penned gem. A win.
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:31:00 AM
A very eloquent reminder, Dr. Upma. All the best. Hope you're keeping well.
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Date: 2/4/2016 10:13:00 AM
Excellent pen Dr.Upma! Beautifully painted piece dear friend.A 7!Wishing you a lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)Hugs! D.
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:44:00 PM
Your vice is added to the countless others that hear your words and see a world in pain. Your mind set flows onto the page and we can relate with you and where your words lead us. Emile.
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Date: 2/3/2016 1:17:00 PM
Nicely done, Dr. Upma. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/3/2016 11:13:00 AM
A wonderful write, Upma. I enjoyed the read, best to you in the contest~ Caryl
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Date: 2/2/2016 6:23:00 PM
Well have you done. A lot there to reflect upon. I have to decide how I can better myself and what to tackle first!!!
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Date: 1/30/2016 7:50:00 AM
I really like how you did this one Upma. I expect it will do well.
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Date: 1/30/2016 6:09:00 AM
A fine representation of temptation! Good luck in the contest!!
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