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The Dead Man's Bells

"We are here" He shouted from crisp lips A deep articulated freshness climbed the glossy sky future timed night broken A friendly brawl with the valley whore woke the man's white throat "You have brought me the world" Beyond the leaves and trees the air appeared to understand A mocking bird from nearby spoke and the dead man's bells echoed in silent laughter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/24/2010 9:25:00 PM
wow!!!!! this ones beautiful piece of work!!!!!!!! and thanks for reading n putting a comment on my poetry!!!!!vrushani!!!!!
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Date: 12/18/2010 1:03:00 AM
Just fyi I wrote this and changed it today. I went back to the original name of the plant (the title) from foxgloves back dead mans bells. I thought the "dead" in that might hint at the dreaming man being gravely injured. He is very alive and nature is just poking fun at him and his wild dream. Thanks for all the nice comments
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Date: 12/17/2010 8:03:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:04:00 AM
this ones beautiful work!!!!!!!! vrushani!!!
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Date: 12/16/2010 3:27:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rob. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/16/2010 2:43:00 AM
This was excellent, left me wanting more.
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