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THE DAYS IN A BOX OF CHOCOLATES

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THE DAYS IN A BOX OF CHOCOLATES

                     The days can be like a box of choclates:

                                          Sweet,
                                           bitter,
                                           sticky,
                                        tenacious,
                                          round,
                                          square,
                                          lumpy,
                                           nuts,
                                          crispy,
                                          bright,
                                           dark.

        How has your day been? What kind of chocolate could make it better!

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  1. Date: 5/2/2012 12:27:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Sweeet Milk Chocolate, My Dear Precious Beautiful Laila * When I Was A Child On Halloween Night, I Would Seperate All My Chocolate From My Other Candy & Treats ˜ Stay Up Half The Night & Place What Was Left Aneath Pillow ˜ Smile, So That My Big Brother Wouldn't Steal Its Joys Away From Myself Afore I Awoke & Skipped School; Which Was The Rule In Place For The Baby Boys, Who Loved Their Sweet Chocolate * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜sud3

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 5/4/2012 12:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visit, "chocolateboy"! I mad about chocolate myself, so I understand you hiding them! oxox always Laila
  1. Date: 2/15/2012 3:07:00 PM
    Really like the ways you used the different kinds of chocolate to describe the days...excellent use of a simile. It implies that all of your days are good ones (especially if you like chocolate...and who doesn't?). (Thank you for reading my poem, and for the warm welcome to the soup.)

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 2/15/2012 11:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading Gail! Appreciate your feedback, always! You were all worth tho comments on your poem! oxoxo love Laila
  1. Date: 2/13/2012 1:21:00 PM
    I will take them all Laila....I love chocolate!!! SWEET chocolate and poem!!!! UHU!!!love from mom.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/14/2012 3:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    O.K. only two???pleace!!!
    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 2/14/2012 3:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading mum, but remember that not all fo ckocolates is good for you! oxoxo love Laila
  1. Date: 2/13/2012 12:02:00 AM
    :o) I got a little smile from this.I sat here thinking what could make it better?But I couldn't pick one..And now I'm hungry for chocolate! :o)

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 2/13/2012 1:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading Dan, always a pleasure to get comments from you. Grab a snickers and stop your hunger! oxoxo love Laila
  1. Date: 2/12/2012 11:30:00 PM
    Clever and clean as a whistle. Your spirited poem is almost tasty. Always, Laura

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 2/12/2012 11:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading my poem, but remember to brush! oxoxo love Laila
  1. Date: 2/12/2012 7:02:00 PM
    I went to store and bought me a box of pot of gold chocolates. I dug for a gold nugget but found didley squat, so I squished them all to see the soft and mushy ones and I found it, bingo, the squishy soft caramel ooze, now that's a caramel. Oh my dear as Tom Hanks the cute patutie said "Life is a box of chocolates, you never know what your going to get, " hope your smiling my love, vie

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 2/12/2012 11:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading my poem! It is important to take care of our teeth, if not it soon will be expensive! oxoxo love Laila
  1. Date: 2/12/2012 4:00:00 PM
    Now this is a poem that I can really sink my teeth into, Laila. lol For me it would be double chocolate with sprinkles on it; chocolate cake, oh yeah with chocolate icing too. I have to keep my dentist wealthy! lol Love Jane

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 2/12/2012 11:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading, always good with chocolate, in even good times and bad times! oxoxo love Laila
  1. Date: 2/12/2012 3:07:00 PM
    Give me the sweetest chocolate there is,Laila! The sweeter,the better:) Love,Arild

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 2/12/2012 3:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You have already got the sweetest chocolate there is, I call her mom! He he he oxoxo love Laila
  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:38:00 PM
    mmmm.yes... chocolate... cute poem..always..pd

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 2/12/2012 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading me again, I'll celebrate with a chocolate! oxoxo love Laila
  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:27:00 PM
    Hmmm?...I think today would be a light chocolate with a raspberry center! This is a neat concept for a poem..I did hear that you are now a regular on the Soup,..I just didn't know how to spell your name..thanks for initiating a handshake to me by reading my latest...very nice of you, darling. Relating anything in this life to coffee or chocolate is really up my alley! An adrenaline junkie, I thrive on these things. Check your soup mail..Gwendolen

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 2/12/2012 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for nice words and your passion for chocolate is mutal! See you around! oxoxo love Laila