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The Day You Left

I've raised my hands to sky and wished it last I guess I wished too hard cause it blew away too fast I've pictured him in every second from my future but now I'm just from his past I wish I gave him all of me , I wish I did it right Maybe he wouldn't have left me and maybe I would've had him next to me every night But without him I've no strength , I've lost myself , I've lost my sight I kept on missing and failing over and over again And now there's no word that could describe the major hole inside my heart nor the pain My heart dumped me when you choose to leave, and so too my brain Without you I'm torn apart Neither do I have breaths nor do I have a heart The moment you left me felt like I've been stabbed with a poisoned dart

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Ramadan Jaffal

Date: 4/17/2018 7:03:00 AM

Very nice I am wondering if you have a poet that talks about Jordan country that would be appreciated

Dalia Shahein
Date: 6/25/2018 7:45:00 PM

Actually I'm Palestinian , Jordanian but I never wrote anything about jordan I always write about a big cause , like my poem sand storm it talks about revelations and war in the whole world and not in a specific region , but off course I don't mind writing one about jordan in the future , thank you for commenting much appreciated .

Eye Truth-Teller

Date: 5/30/2017 12:52:00 PM

heart broken here poet

Dalia Shahein
Date: 6/5/2017 6:13:00 PM

Yeah , definitely , thank you for visiting my poems I appreciate it , hugs / :)

White Sage

Date: 5/21/2017 8:45:00 PM

you didn't wish too hard, sometimes some things just happen and we have no control over them, to continue to blame ourselves over it will hurt us more. I know you'll find your smile again dear, best wishes to you.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 5/22/2017 7:17:00 AM

This poem is fictional my sweet friend , just needed to direct what's inside of me and this what came out , it came from anger and sadness , many thanks for you my dear , hugs // :)