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The Day Was Dark

The day was dark The fires cold No shred of joy Could e're be found No song of lark Nor tales of old Not a single Cheerful sound A sudden cry Stricken, grieving, Sharply pierced The misty air Then in reply Sick with feeling More voices wail Songs of despair The sound heightened 'Till all did hear Mournfully ringing O'er creek and hill None could lighten The hopeless fear War was coming The day darkened still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/17/2015 10:37:00 PM
Amice:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:49:00 PM
Hehe thanks! I don't know why it did that... how do they decide?
Date: 11/17/2015 3:52:00 AM
thoughtful post...nice poem AMice :)
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:49:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 11/16/2015 11:08:00 PM
Amice, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:48:00 PM
Thank you! Nice to meet you! :) -Amice
Date: 11/16/2015 10:25:00 AM
Fear of war, especially in a mother's breast, but also with lovers. I like this one for its truth and brevity. Congrats, daver
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:50:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/16/2015 7:00:00 AM
Nice.
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:47:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 11/14/2015 9:42:00 PM
Hi Amice, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/14/2015 9:45:00 PM
Thank you! Yea I'm just new at this :/ Nice to meet you!
Date: 11/14/2015 8:46:00 PM
Guys I'm a new writer I really want to know what you think!
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