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The Day Our Moon Turned Red

Someday in the future Our moon will turn red Raped and stripped And left for dead For in her core Is the need for humans to survive But the greed of us She will never revive These actions of us Will resonate through universe worlds Where we will be tagged and flagged As totally absurd We managed to escape The year 2012 We are now about to be Cast and shelved Many years ago We had the chance to repent But where ever we went We destroyed and left spent Who ever is left From our human race Will have nowhere to go To ever show face As out there, their are Other races of creed Much different from us The perfect seed http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-6.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/24/2009 12:18:00 PM
James.. u are an inspiration and encouragement with your comments and with your verses too... why are u not on the top 50 poets list? this poem The Day Our Moon Turned Red is dynamic .. truth be told.. is anyone out there listening? I put u on my favorites along with this poem..more please... Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/24/2009 11:28:00 AM
Very Halloweenish here, James ... LOL ... excellent writing !!
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Date: 10/24/2009 4:35:00 AM
Someday the moon will turn red as blood and there will be other signs in the heavens as to the fact that the end of time will come. Nice job even though I don't totally agree. That is life differences of opinion. Keep writing. You are good and getting better. Sara
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Date: 10/23/2009 3:55:00 PM
or not hon...perhaps there are only seeds and none perfect? For what is perfection after all? Light & Love
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