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The Day I Left the Soup

The day I left the soup a tear begat my eye pictures of streams, meadows, and fairy tales somehow vanished from a bright daydream sky emptiness tugged heartstrings in my holy grail The spirits poured a sour sauvignon blanc tune spilt out from closed chambers of a silent room rags on the floor wipe away at an ugly buffoon closing another chapter away in an ancient tomb Sunset smiles for one final curtain call then flies dreams darken, fairy dust is dropped and all is lost promises all have floated away with the butterflies and the Easter lilies have all given way to the frost The day I left the soup a tear begat my eye My dear friends it is so hard to say goodbye 03/21/2016

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Date: 9/1/2016 3:07:00 PM
Tim don't leave The Soup I do like your poetry. I rated your poem 7
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Date: 3/23/2016 1:30:00 PM
A lovely sonnet suggestive of sad goodbyes, but hopefully only fictional! // paul
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Date: 3/22/2016 12:44:00 AM
Lovely as usual, but I'm with everyone else ... HOPE it's just a poem ... you're the Original Tim. I will be sad to see you leave :(
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Date: 3/21/2016 5:02:00 PM
What? Huh? You are a presence. Your poem is lovely, truly, but I don't think I like the message. What's up? CayCay
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Date: 3/21/2016 3:54:00 PM
Promises all have floated away with the butterflies/and the Easter lillies have all given way to the frost... These lines are so sad yet beautiful... Hope this is fictional Tim. You belong here on ps...
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Date: 3/21/2016 3:16:00 PM
I hope this isn't true, Tim. I hope it's just a poem. You had better not leave....
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Date: 3/21/2016 2:37:00 PM
Hey where are you going? The internet is worldwide. Where are we supposed to get our Tim fix.
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Date: 3/21/2016 11:01:00 AM
ohh, deep thoughts well expressed, tim.. huggs
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Date: 3/21/2016 10:58:00 AM
wow, intense imagery tim! hugs xxx
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