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The Day I Died

Today is the day I died Young girl who loved the forest The wind and all that’s wild Young girl who used to sit Under an old oak tree That offered her protection A cradle for her thoughts Young girl who didn’t care About this silly world That kneels us down And makes us weak Goodbye young girl With curly hair Goodbye sweet purity Goodbye my youth Will we ever meet again?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 2/7/2016 10:31:00 AM
MONICA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:39:00 PM
Monica, this is a very good poem. Love SKAT
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