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The Day After in a Mall

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The Day After in a Mall

When that jolly red man with a sack
brings your wishes to you off the rack,
no late Christmas night
for first frosty light,
warm the car up and take it all back.

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  1. Date: 12/10/2010 9:35:00 AM
    ah ha! a grinch LOL..right some of us need money for health insurance (wince) Light & Love good win!

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 9:04:00 PM
    way to go, Gerard, A great place in this fun contest! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 11:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Christmas" contest Gerard. So happy to see your name high on the list.Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 3:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 3rd place win. God Bless. Leon

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 3:34:00 PM
    Good one..That is what happens with much of the gifts...Congratulations on the win..Sara

  1. Date: 12/5/2010 4:35:00 AM
    Congrats Gerard my friend on your big win in Francine's contest with this delightful entry luv.. bravo.. good one.. enjoy a top win with luv..are u ready for some football?

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 4:29:00 PM
    Big congratulations to you, Gerard! Your poem rocks!! (So do you.) Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 3:57:00 PM
    Gerard, wonderful joy, and congratulations on your third place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 3:41:00 PM
    This one made me laugh, Gerard!! Great work!! :) Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 2:39:00 PM
    I work in retail and related to this one in a big way , congrats on your third place win in my contest Gerard, thank you for supporting it

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 10:41:00 AM
    Amazing. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Gerard and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/3/2010 8:10:00 AM
    Guess you've had some experience with this, eh, Gerard? Such a fun limerick! Hope you entered it in Francine's contest. Thanks for your kind comments, dear friend. Hope you don't have to make this return to the mall with unwanted gifts this year. LOL Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 8:20:00 PM
    hahaha. sounds like you have experience with this one! Luv, Andrea