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The Dawning of Love

"There is mystery in how we love, but not in why." -Anne Michaels (inspired by 'Columbine' by Mark Helprin). Children high on a hill in the night, carefully tracing their footsteps at first, the countryside bandaged in moonlight. Feeling the thrill and the fear of being out beyond curfew as fairy lights flash in the valley, assurance their lifeline to safety is still within reach. Giddy with awe, gazing up at the heavens they are dumbstruck, imagining what it would be like to capture a star! Music from the campfire dances lightly on the air, shifting through the darkness like the whisper of a dream. He helps her climb a wall into their next adventure as they skip down to the river rippling merrily below. There's a feeling between them they cannot explain, a breathless attraction; joy fills their hearts and they know that they won't be the same. The first inklings of love are suggested at last, they hold hands as they stroll down the hillside - the spell has been cast!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/28/2016 8:55:00 PM
Mesmerizing and profound, spontaneously beautiful.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/28/2016 10:31:00 PM
Your kind remarks are most gratefully appreciated... best wishes, Keith
Date: 4/28/2016 4:59:00 PM
Interesting work.."The first inklings of love are suggested at last, they hold hands as they stroll down the hillside - the spell has been cast!"..I especially like this part of your poem..Columbine was a horrible tragedy..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/28/2016 10:34:00 PM
Helprin's reference to Columbine has nothing whatsoever to do with the tragedy... an unfortunate happenstance. Thanks so much for your review. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 4/28/2016 4:47:00 PM
absolutely delightful Keith - such gentle imagery of the innocence of first love - really enjoyed:-)A real feel good poem made me smile:) hugs jan xx 7
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/28/2016 4:53:00 PM
Thank you Jan! Your kind remarks are much appreciated... Best wishes, Keith

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